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kiwiihewitt



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PostSubject: Critiques?    Sat Jan 19, 2013 7:50 pm

I have been trying my best, and I think I've improved a lot... last monday I got posted on GS ;__; and it was kindda of a let down Dissapointed , but I'll keep on working on myself Welcome


Here's today's makeup:




seems like I like doing that face orz

I am focusing on the eye make... I will try to go on step by step :3 any advice?
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Sun Jan 20, 2013 6:13 am

I like it! I would add some eyeshadow, it's cute and will give more focus on the eyes! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:22 am

Izaberu wrote:
I like it! I would add some eyeshadow, it's cute and will give more focus on the eyes! ^^

Thanks! Wave
I think so too, maybe in the crease of the eye?
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Sun Jan 27, 2013 4:52 pm

your eye make is amazing!!! i love it!

maybe u can add white eyeshadow to the inner corner of ur eyes
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Wed Jan 30, 2013 7:47 am

kiwiihewitt wrote:
Izaberu wrote:
I like it! I would add some eyeshadow, it's cute and will give more focus on the eyes! ^^

Thanks! Wave
I think so too, maybe in the crease of the eye?

Yes, that would be cute! You can have a light eyeshadow and a darker in the crease ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Thu Jan 31, 2013 2:34 am

Thank you both Wave
I'll try to apply a lighter shadow on the inner corner.. and a darker one on the crease ><
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Fri Feb 08, 2013 12:44 pm

I think my suggestion would be trying some lashes with longer bands so the the false lashes would cover the whole top lid and not just the center to the ends of your eyes. I'm not sure if I'm making sense? LOL For example a lot of Japanese brands like Dolly Wink and Diamond Lash make their bands much longer than Western brands.

If anything, I think the eyeliner is not doing your makeup justice. I think the eyeliner should be dark enough to blend in with your lashes but they appear gray in the pictures.

Although I can't tell from the picture lighting but do you use any blush? I think it'd add more depth to your face and brighten it up. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Critiques?    Sat Feb 09, 2013 7:49 pm

sincerelydolly wrote:
I think my suggestion would be trying some lashes with longer bands so the the false lashes would cover the whole top lid and not just the center to the ends of your eyes. I'm not sure if I'm making sense? LOL For example a lot of Japanese brands like Dolly Wink and Diamond Lash make their bands much longer than Western brands.

If anything, I think the eyeliner is not doing your makeup justice. I think the eyeliner should be dark enough to blend in with your lashes but they appear gray in the pictures.

Although I can't tell from the picture lighting but do you use any blush? I think it'd add more depth to your face and brighten it up. Smile
I see what you mean :3 and I actually agree with u >< I need a way to make the eyelines appear darker as the lashes...
And yes I'm wearing blush but it seems like the light doesn't show it at all orz
Thanks for the tips :3
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