I think my suggestion would be trying some lashes with longer bands so the the false lashes would cover the whole top lid and not just the center to the ends of your eyes. I'm not sure if I'm making sense? LOL For example a lot of Japanese brands like Dolly Wink and Diamond Lash make their bands much longer than Western brands.
If anything, I think the eyeliner is not doing your makeup justice. I think the eyeliner should be dark enough to blend in with your lashes but they appear gray in the pictures.
Although I can't tell from the picture lighting but do you use any blush? I think it'd add more depth to your face and brighten it up.