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PostSubject: mkay, critique?   Thu Nov 05, 2009 12:43 am

so hows about i raided my closet and i found maybe just one outfit (for now) that i thought could be categorize as gal... um it kinna does look trashy because the coat is a bit flashy with the over the knee boots. please critique me?

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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:31 am

super cute! looks great or banba or tsuyome~!
hm, as look as you have the corresponding make,
jewelry, and hair then i say your good to go!
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:27 pm

Maybe a skimpier top? Otherwise the outfit is perfect! You could also put this outfit with heeled shoes during summer when it's warmer.

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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Fri Nov 06, 2009 1:19 pm

Super hot kawaii !!
Especially the coat... love it !!
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:09 pm

YanYan wrote:
Maybe a skimpier top? Otherwise the outfit is perfect! You could also put this outfit with heeled shoes during summer when it's warmer.

um i don't know, i think that might not be the best idea.
with short-shorts and high boots, waring a skimpy top
is a bit over board, don't ya agree? i don't know ^^; haha
thats just my opinion~ i like the look as it is! super cute~!
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Fri Nov 06, 2009 7:47 pm

ahhh thanks you guys, you have no idea how much i debated on walking out of the house with it! i really love the coat but i thought it could've been a bit overwhelming on me cuhz im short... like 5 foot even haha. Yeah, i would've tried for a skimpier top, but it was finally cold fer once in cali=] i think i went for a mod/trashy look lols

oh and here is my face that went with the outfit haha, don't mind the chubby cheeks=]





I didn't apply toooo much mascara and no white streaks, i guess it's just simple and kinna boring. the hair haha, was a regular bun on the top of my head with nude lipstick.

oh and the jacket was from f21! only $32.50
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:52 am

QT kiri-panda wrote:
um i don't know, i think that might not be the best idea.
with short-shorts and high boots, waring a skimpy top
is a bit over board, don't ya agree? i don't know ^^; haha
thats just my opinion~ i like the look as it is! super cute~!
I think with such a baggy coat a skin fitting top is ideal so that you don't end up looking fatter than you actually are. It doesn't seem too much to me at all because the coat is so long and baggy lol

@blowfish: Love the outfit and also your eye make-up -- both are very nice together. However I think that to make this outfit complete you need to do something ... more with your hair. Seems so plain with such a statement outfit, ya know?
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:40 am

oh! i see where you are comming from hikitty~!
well what ever you all prefer ^^; it looks cute
either way~ however, i think the cutest part of it
is you! >/////< you are just beautiful~! short, tan
skinny, with lovely facial features and a great
make to top it off~ i like boring hairstyles >_>;
bt i think i agree with hikitty, with suck a bold
look, you are going to need bold hair, but super
pretty over all! you are a lucky lil' thing! haha xD
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sat Nov 07, 2009 12:56 pm

Hikitty, you are right! a tighter top would've been better because the coat was big and long, so i think my body would've been more defined=] and yes, now that i look at it from a different perspective, maybe big wavy hair, like sex hair, would've totally looked better than a bun sweatdrop
well i will attempt all of that the next time i wear this outfit=]... and repost a before and after.

To QT kiri-panda: you are wayy sweet haha, makes me blush.. kawaii the contacts i had on really put the look together. tan skinned and blue geo contact lenses... i should've dyed my hair blonder because as you can see, my roots are growing out=[ and mmaybe i should make my eyebrows more skinnier?
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:09 pm

>> I have to say something is off about the jacket.
I actually love the shirt (i own the same one lol)
But back the the jacket...I feel that it could've been shorter, stopping just at the waist.
Or it could be the large amount of leopard print thats throwing me off...not sure haha.
Shorten the jacket and lay your eyeliner on a bit thicker.

@0@ I feel like I droned on and on.
Uhmm ill come back later with style suggestions for your hair!
<33 You are very pretty!!! im jealous of how easy it is for you to find a nude lip color that looks good
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sun Nov 08, 2009 6:48 am

xblowfishx wrote:
maybe i should make my eyebrows more skinnier?
To me, in this picture at least, they look fine; you don't want to go too skinny as then they look horrendous. Actually, the only problem I would ever have with your eyebrows is if you left them their natural colour and then went blonde, it just wouldn't work.
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:15 am

Hikitty wrote:
xblowfishx wrote:
maybe i should make my eyebrows more skinnier?
To me, in this picture at least, they look fine; you don't want to go too skinny as then they look horrendous. Actually, the only problem I would ever have with your eyebrows is if you left them their natural colour and then went blonde, it just wouldn't work.
Maybe you could thin them out and then come back and fill them in with powder or something like that....please get the help of a professional though. lol
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:20 am

If we're talking about skinnier eyebrows, I think she's fine, but if we're talking about thinner eyebrows then yes, they'd look nice filled back in, but I'm biased as I do this too xD
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PostSubject: Re: mkay, critique?   Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:20 pm

i think i will get them thinner, and yes from a professional BobaTea, haha not by my own hands XD
as of right now, i fill the ends ( the tip after the arch ) in with a pencil and a bit of powder so they don't look as harsh. It's a tiring process because sometimes, i end up with pointed angles hahah, and i end up looking like mommy dearest.
however, when i don't draw them in, they're like shaped, but not defined.. it's an odd mess i tell you.
and no i won't go skinny to the point where i'd have to use sharpies to redraw them. XD
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